filler wrote:
I worked a bit more on this script tonight. Including the work that was already done on this script, and based ONLY off the number of blocks NOT the size of the blocks, the first draft is somewhere around 37% complete.
Having a sleepless night tonight for a variety of reasons, I have diverted my thoughts by working on Slayers. I have rolled back the Dec 7 updates so conversations in Crimson Town won't lock, and I have incorporated all of your suggestions in that city, as well as the Shouji Forest. The story is even better now. I appreciate the positive and upbeat manner in which you have expressed your ideas and suggestions, the essence of good teamwork and brainstorming! You are fun to work with in this collaborative effort, and Red Soul is starting to help me tie up some of the technical details, too.
I used the "IT'S A Trap!" line because it's perfect for that scene. Now, I want to go back and work in Naga's gargantuan
melons in some way, in reference to the nesting slimes!! That is an absolute riot, but applicability to the storyline might be a stretch, unless maybe I can use it in the Goblin Pit early on where her lewd consume creeps out Lina and Claire. The graphic that flashes up makes it appear as if Lina and Claire are actually puking!
Anyway, if you like Aretha-II, I'm going to try to talk you and Bongo` into Aretha-I... I'm getting hooked on these chick-RPGs! I had no idea so many of them existed.
That's exciting news about Aretha-II progress. Bongo` was really bummed about its relative stagnation a few months ago, but Rome wasn't built in a day, neh?